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The Cold
Contributed by
jonteD
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:47:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's cold, the starlit clear sky,
The chill silence across the fields,
Days are short, soon the dark,
Winter brings no joy at all.
I stop for a second, no reason,
The mind drifts back and forth,
To times when it was really hot,
Perhaps I smiled then, not now.
Where are you now, at this time,
Who are you with and why not me,
What was it that I did wrong,
Why did you say goodbye?
You are now my winter,
Cold, distant, a frown, no joy,
But you were once the summer sun,
And we talked and danced as one.
Not a word, nothing you say,
Am I not even seen as a friend,
It's cold whatever the weather,
No you, thus winter the year long.
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jonteD
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2004-01-12 08:47:41]
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Re: The Cold
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:57:33 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sad..but so beautifully written...
Hugs from someone in your future...
Little Lady... |
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Re: The Cold
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:13:11 AM AEST
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Oh so sad!! But beautifully written!! Keep on writing!! Very vivid imagery!
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Re: The Cold
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by Manicmuze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:20:42 PM AEST
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This is painfully sad and full of emotion. Full of heartache and longing.
Very real emotion expressed here, has universal appeal... i think we can all relate.
Nicely done, enjoyed this,
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Re: The Cold
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:19:18 PM AEST
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I felt your poem clear to my toes. Very moving. Wonderful poem.
Kie |
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