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insanity's plight
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:24:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I stood before the bodies
of the dying and the dead
Wondering how wed gotten
to this place that weve been led
Looking for the reasons
though none there could I find
Lost within the confusion
of a doubtful worried mind
As tears of bitter sorrow
stream down upon my face
followed cries of anger
that feel so out of place
And as I search the far horizons
no angels do I see
As it seems that heavens host
has took this time to flee
To leave us all to wonder
and wander the path of fate
And left it to our sinful selves
to rid our hearts of hate
To try and find the answers
of why we stand and bleed
To fill our hungered wanting
and quench this human need
To look beyond the sorrow
in search of better days
And hope beyond tomorrow
to change our killing ways.
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wordsy
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2004-01-12 10:24:18]
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Re: insanity's plight
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:28:13 AM AEST
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'To leave us all to wonder
and wander the path of fate
And left it to our sinful selves
to rid our hearts of hate'
Wow! I loved the way you made the words rhyme and such dark and bitter words! Good one!!
Anne |
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Re: insanity's plight
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:49:05 AM AEST
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Excellent!! The ryhme, the flow, the words...your talent had been missed my friend.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: insanity's plight
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:00:55 PM AEST
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| This was a wonderful write! Great to see you writing again you have been missed! Christina |
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Re: insanity's plight
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:49:05 AM AEST
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i love this..
charlotte x_x_x |
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