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~ Woodsheds
Contributed by
manicmuze
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:20:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Orphans and outcasts and gypsies
Understand about woodsheds
Squeezing property lines
Where they hide the moonshine
Old howls and notions
Dismantled relics
The unwanted and lonesome
A tomb for the unclaimed
The hushed and stolen
In a matchbox where the floorboard
Grunts, wedges into the corners
And squats with the morsels and crumbs
Anchors and scandals
The pulse of the shingles
Faint and fading fast
A collapsed cocoon
A darkroom for deviants
Hung from lopsided rafters
By their short-ends
Nodding
And the murmurs of
A vacant hatching
Flawed and hidden
In a cluster of
What legends are made of
Orphans and outcasts and gypsies
Understand about woodsheds
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Re: ~ Woodsheds
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:25:59 PM AEST
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Hmmm well I don't understand about woodshed lol..Very original topic! And vivid imagery :D
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Re: ~ Woodsheds
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:21:54 PM AEST
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I loved this!!
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Re: ~ Woodsheds
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by jonteD on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:32:36 PM AEST
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| Class act |
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Re: ~ Woodsheds
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:46:29 AM AEST
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A topic that I've never written about or even considered. Wow. This was interesting for sure. I give this a 4.8 on the Nortiscale.
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