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An Inspiration
Contributed by
manicmuze
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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perhaps its raining there
i wonder how you're feeling
if you're dreaming at this moment
of a sunnier day
or if you're locked away somewhere
feeling sorry for yourself
the way i do sometimes
on rainy Sunday afternoons
perhaps you're surrounded
in bad company,
wishing you were some place else
anywhere, —maybe with me
finger drawing on the window pane
watching the rain, warm and cozy
by the fire
snuggling in its glow
perhaps you're with a friend
reminiscing of good times
tending to your needs, drinking
a glass of wine and smiling,
surprised you still can
with all that's on your mind
but smiling just the same
perhaps you're sleeping
sprawled out on your bed
with sexy little fairies dancing
in your head, and the background
sounds of a distant whisper
composing the melody
to keep you warm
perhaps you've become
a poem
Copyright ©
manicmuze
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2004-01-12 12:31:35]
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Re: An Inspiration
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:40:24 PM AEST
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wow, this poems so true, I think you did a great job here, keep it real
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Re: An Inspiration
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:46:50 PM AEST
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Very true! Beautiful words and imagery!! Nice poem!! Keep on writing!
Anne ;) |
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Re: An Inspiration
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:47:09 PM AEST
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Very true! Beautiful words and imagery!! Nice poem!! Keep on writing!
Anne ;) |
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Re: An Inspiration
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by jonteD on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:30:28 PM AEST
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| You'll have to teach me how to write this good because you have the gift of poetry. |
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Re: An Inspiration
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by spiffyphil on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:33:15 PM AEST
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Great peice! I like how you set the mood, I can feel the imagry.
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Re: An Inspiration
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:44:20 AM AEST
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Last line - surprising and perfect. Sexy dancing fairies - I need some of them heh heh. Ok, I'm not being a real good reader/commenter here. I'll give this one a 4 on the Nortiscale.
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