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If This Was A Sexy Poem
Contributed by
manicmuze
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:14:40 PM in AEST
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if this was a sexy poem
you would want her
almost naked on the page
with just enough
to make you curious
full of intrigue
intellect and mind play,
a seductress,
a tease,
an innocent smile
and in between the words
within the pauses
where she breathes,
her pulse is quickening
as you read
and the longing of her words,
her needs, drip and run together
into streams of pleasure
and fantasy,
til she comes again
through the pen,
your hand between her knees
your finger tracing her margins
craving touch, her flavor,
lust and spontaneous behavior
weaves minds, entwines
intimacy and poetry
and leaves wrinkles
on the paper
Copyright ©
manicmuze
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2004-01-12 13:14:40]
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Re: If This Was A Sexy Poem
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by jonteD on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:26:36 PM AEST
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Your pen a better lover than I will ever be.
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Re: If This Was A Sexy Poem
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:08:39 PM AEST
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AWESOME! I feel as if I have just been teased~~!
My imagination is on overdrive.....
Kie |
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Re: If This Was A Sexy Poem
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:08:46 PM AEST
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| If my boyfriend could read this then he would feel teased. |
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Re: If This Was A Sexy Poem
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:30:19 AM AEST
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Truly interesting and I am an old sourpuss who doesn't get alarmed at much. The imagery was imaginative, the length was just right and the words were used sparcely.
I give this a 4.99 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: If This Was A Sexy Poem
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:24:19 PM AEST
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| Nice write. It was pretty good. I like the idea behind it. |
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