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When a Man is phisically with you....but his heart it's somewhere else....
Contributed by
kativette
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:03:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why is it that you can’t let go of your past?
And you outlawing me from getting close to your heart
Are you afraid that we will not last?
Trust in me, ‘LOVING YOU’ I’ll make my task.
I know your heart aches and that I understand.
Since that special person from your life just fled,
right when you thought you’d be wed.
So let me know when you find the strengths,
and finally just move ahead,
of something that was and came to an end.
Perhaps right now all you need is just a friend?
You should be shame,
Your excuses are lame,
since also a friend I had became.
Giselle Velez.
Copyright ©
kativette
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2004-01-12 18:03:35]
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Re: When a Man is phisically with you....but his heart it's somewhere else....
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:07:20 PM AEST
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Oh how sad to read this! Your writing was terrific, you showed a lot of anger in it! Great you've expressed yourself very good :D
Anne :D Keep goin! |
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Re: When a Man is phisically with you....but his heart it's somewhere else....
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:08:30 PM AEST
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takes me to my past nicely done
keep them coming
michelle |
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Re: When a Man is phisically with you....but his heart it's somewhere else....
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:46:12 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I liked it. Well written. |
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