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A Kiss
Contributed by
ml03
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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kiss to last for a lifetime play'd again and again over and over in my memory
your sweet embrace your lips soft and tame wet wit desire ready to risk it for a moment
eyes held shut all i see is the beauty of darkness the innocence of life wiltin' slowly petal by petal
lips spread wide open massagin' borderline between good and bad innocent and x-rated tongues caress one and other up and down leadin' away from righteousness
one kiss to last taint'd by the journey the return it was so pure and innocent were did it go off track when did we take the exit to hardcore sexxxiness
mommy never said it start'd wit a kiss that it would all be so innocent and daddy never told me 'bout the birds and the bees or what to expect all they said was it was bad and you'd go to hell and burn for an eternity
but believe me i didn't know i was doin' anything wrong i thought it was all just a kiss so innocent
am i slut a hoe my cherry is popp'd can you see the change in my eyes do i look more mature or has darkness consum'd me am i satan's spawn cause of a kiss
mommy you ain't all perfect daddy neither are you so will you be in hell wit me will we cry together will we burn together will it be a family affair?
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2004-01-13 03:10:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by lonesomerose on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:19:47 AM AEST (User
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:36:35 AM AEST (User
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Wow-ho-ho! Easy now!^_^ A kiss should be something very special and intimate, holy and pure, but of course it could go other way depend on how you look at it; just treat the kiss with respect and you will be an Angel! ^_^ Smooth beautiful work! |
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST (User
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This was a very good write and I like how you ended it. I think it conveyed your feelings very well. Well done. |
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