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Sinful Rain Hour
Contributed by
lostinlimbo
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:05:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The rain so cold
My skin burnt with holes
Drop angrily hit
Like Heaven's spit
So disgusted and so sad
Enough is had
Sinful will fall
Droplets will maul
The honest will carry on
The rain will be gone
They will never feel
The pain that will not heal
Innocent to the power
Of the sinful rain hour
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lostinlimbo
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2004-01-13 11:05:31]
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Re: Sinful Rain Hour
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:01:53 AM AEST
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Another excellent portrayal of a misconception about our significance in the life of the planet.
You write very expressively. Create great impact images
I agree that there is no relation between us and the natural forces that the cosmos generates.
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