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Ravens Kiss
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:18:32 PM in AEST
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I kiss your brow
as I pull you
in to die.
You my love
won't live through
this lonely night.
I'm the one you
always worried about.
Savage loving that
I gave on this night.
Bit your neck harder
than ever before.
My intentions to draw
blood fulfilled by lust.
Sometimes you ran
from me and
sometimes you ran
to me.
Rollin' all night long
you just never knew
that tonight
I'd end your life.
Depression an obsession.
I claim your life.
My own I take
as I gently lay
by your side.
This perfect night
I'd never waste.
This love now
will never die.
The faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-01-13 12:18:32]
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by Destiny on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:59:55 PM AEST
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You poems creep me out with how cool they are.*shiver*
It's kind of like with being obsessed with something deadly, it's beautiful in it's own sense and draws you in |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:34:03 PM AEST
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My god! What a twisted and beautiful poem! Very passionate and in the same time scary! The ending is wonderful! (lol you sound like a vampire.......you aren't....are you? lol Joking) I loved this one!! Great!!
Anne ;) |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:32:30 PM AEST
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Twisted indeed! I didn't know u had this in u Jeff. I loved this it was great how u said 'this love now will never die.' How chilling was that!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:22:18 AM AEST
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| Who can say if this is insane or not ... obsessive love ... together forever ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:15:18 AM AEST
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Wow what wicked imagery, you are indecently so clever.
Great write
Dal |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:54:09 PM AEST
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Hun I really liked this poem! It gave me chills for some reason! Maybe u are just that tallented! Love ya! Love:::Kirby
Great poem! |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:40:48 PM AEST
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This is awesome! I love it! Very chilling, but somehow satisfying... as weird as that is... :S
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:50:03 PM AEST
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| ooo, a very dark love. :) twisted, yes, but I like |
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Re: Ravens Kiss
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by a_bear on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:34:59 PM AEST
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I read this because my grandaughter's name is Raeven. I thought it might be about something beautiful...oh well. At least her name is spelled differently. I don't care for the dark things...vampirism..gothic love...ugh! But thats a matter of taste I guess. I've read some of your other, lighter stuff and loved it. You are a very good poet no matter the subject..
mary |
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