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Bleed Blue Eyes
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:48:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Return these eyes upon me
Give me back my will
I'm walking through the shadows
Searching for my home, even still
Lost without surrender
Giving up as I start to bleed
This darkness that surrounds me
I take nothing, less I need
Descending into tunnels
This dungeon of despair
Left me broken into pieces
Scattered everywhere
Myself who picks up the pieces
I lay shattered on this cold floor
Flowing blood of passion
And it seems you only take from me, more
It's not like I killed your trust
Or even gave you reason to abandon me
You've left me knee deep in sorrow
Taken in stride as you watch me bleed
Taste the iron as I clutch my breath
Lay here undetermined
It seems, that these bleeding eyes have nothing left
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2004-01-13 12:48:42]
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Re: Bleed Blue Eyes
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:19:50 PM AEST
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wow, I guess everyone feels this way sometimes, and the way you potray it in the poem, is just so filled with sadness and at the same time brings pity. I think its a great poem, and keep up the great work
Alec Fernandez
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Re: Bleed Blue Eyes
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by pooja on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:03:53 AM AEST
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True blue.
used to feel like this myself sometime back.
Its really tough but now I am trying to get back the control of my life.Meanwhile your writing did remind me of tough times gone by.good work |
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