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The sudden, breath, is your LAST!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:48:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the light gets dimmer,
until it goes black,
the monsters re-appear,
so you don't run, you fight back.
the swelling in your head,
is a tu-ma, behind your eyes,
your body is heavy,
and these words you memorize!
your falling apart,
you don't know where to turn,
you've cut your-self again,
THE FRESH HOLES BURN!
you sit and hold you head,
'coz when you stand up you fall,
you're crying in the dark,
you've had enough of it all.
the knife is still there,
lying next to you,
you don't won't to do it again,
but it's the only way to get through.
so your gripping it now,
so tightly in your grasp,
it comes down soo quick,
the sudden, breath, is your last!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-13 13:48:13]
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Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST!
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:38:38 PM AEST
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Gosh! This one is really suicidal! Yeah sometimes i have these thoughts as well. Very vivid description! flowing poem, great!
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Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST!
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:41:50 PM AEST
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| very dark, very good however. |
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Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST!
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by TundraHydra on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:38:02 AM AEST
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| nice! great write |
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Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST!
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:44:43 PM AEST
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| Very suicidal and dark. Morbid to boot. Good write. |
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