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Unstitched Seams
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:47:02 PM in AEST
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Ever licked your skin
And felt your tongue fall in
The crevasses from whence the blood does stream
The gaps beneath those unstitched seams
Deadly poison stains with its taste
The skin, with its white dressings, laced
This mad world is infecting my soul
Whilst my blood bleeds from my minds growing hole
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afraid_of_fear
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2004-01-13 15:47:02]
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Re: Unstitched Seams
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:04:59 PM AEST
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I liked this
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Re: Unstitched Seams
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:48:33 PM AEST
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| this was amazing i compeletly feel what your saying--- great write... |
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Re: Unstitched Seams
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:49:35 PM AEST
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| Somehow that just struck me as insanely morbid... I liked it. Good write. |
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Re: Unstitched Seams
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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I think I read this before, but was to mesmerized to comment and I still don't know what to say. I loved it just isn't accurate, but I did love it. Ok I'll shut up...
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: Unstitched Seams
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:25:00 PM AEST
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Wonderful words,
I love this poem because it seems to have much hidden meaning that could be interperated in many ways,
The title really caught my attention and I couldnt keep my eyes off of it.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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