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FIRST STRUGGLE
Contributed by
Lovingangel4u
on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 02:33:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There is darkness all around and I can hardly move,
All I know I have a conscientious and
I need to get out!
I struggle and weave my contoured body
to and fro..
Finally I see light, l push and shove
with all my might
For my freedom I will fight!
I see the warmth of the sun and the light
Hearing sounds of life all around and
with my mouth a taste a sweet delight.
Oh what warmth peace and comfort I feel
I close my eyes and dont know what is really
In my dreams for now I live
for tomorrow my life will reveal
the person I am to be for real.
Copyright Lovingangel4u 20
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Lovingangel4u
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2002-07-13 14:33:07]
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Re: FIRST STRUGGLE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 03:59:51 AM AEST
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very nice
great write.
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