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Turn The Page
Contributed by
shadowmaster_045
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:27:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You Know You Wanna come To Me. You Know You Gotta Come To Me. Because I Hold The Key To You Destiny. I'm Inside Your Dreams Searching Your Memory. Because I Cannot Think Of Another Way To Reach You These Days. I've Sent This Message More Than One Time, But You Don't Even Care To Reply. So I'll Say This One More Time, You Are Not Real You Can't Feel Every Breath You Take Is Another Mistake Of My Crying Soul. You Just Might Come To Realize. Come To Me I'm waiting For You The Door Is Closed Until You Know More, But With All The Knowledge You Take It Gets Harder To Break The Lock. So You Stalk The Shadows Away From The Light Trying To Stay Out Of My Sight But You Still Don't Realize YOUR IN MY MIND!! The Lock On The Door Can't Be Opened Anymore. I Preserved You Memory For One Simple Fact You See. It Was No Act Whe We Met We Are Meant To Be But This Is Ancient History....Another Memory....
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Re: Turn The Page
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:13:45 PM AEST
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Interesting...
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Re: Turn The Page
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by parisstcair on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:11:47 PM AEST
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| I tihnk that, that was really sweet. I wish a boy would write something like that to me. I would reply. I write poems too and I know how you feel. I'll give you advice. e-mail me at parisstcair@sbcglobal.net |
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Re: Turn The Page
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:17:02 PM AEST
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Different but interesting, I read it like a rap and it works!!!!!
It's also very clever
"You're in my mind! The lock on the door can't be openned anymore"
I liked that (sorry it's not an exact copy)
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Re: Turn The Page
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:18:18 AM AEST
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| It was interesting... |
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