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Lost soul Ztracená duše
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:06:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I hear steps
Echo
Are they mine?
Blaming myself
For theyre so loud
Beat into the silence
I step on darkness
Soul so sad
I dont see light
Only hear to beat
My heart:
let her be
shes looking for herself
lost her aim
summer chilling her
winter warming
she fell in morast
of promising words
stood under waterfall
on a small step
to wash out the guilty
was not possible
She walked further
But storm of jeer
As thought gnawing
Driving her to hurry
Shell be lost more
Poor soul
What to rede her?
Impossible lower
Then higher
But her fall
Still closer
Standing on edge
Sun on the right
Turns her back
Theres the dark
On the left
Light is too bright
Wait for sunset?
And surprised
Telling herself:
nope
Headlong dives
To the dark"
I hear the scream
So familiar seems
Touching myself
I do not feel heat
Soul in the prison
And heaven is hell
Millions tears
Falling down my face
Looking for a soul
For one body
Heart beating
Although did not want it
But it has to
Cos life suits it
Dont you know the path?
Dont you know the soul?
Slym kroky,
Ozvěnu
Jsou m vlastn?
Kladu si za vinu
e jsou tak hlučn
Bij do ticha
lapu tmou
Due přesmutn
Nevidm světlo
Jen slym bt
Srdce na poplach
Nechte ji jt
Hled sebe
Ztratila cl
Lto ji zebe
A zima hřeje ji
Upadla v močl
Slibnch slov
Stoupla pod vodopd
Na mal schod
Smt tu vinu
Ne, to nelo
la o kus dl,
Leč bouře vsměchu
Jak mylenka hlod
ene ji do spěchu
To nezn dobře
Ztrat se vc
Uboh due
Co jen j řct?
Kdy to nejde n
Jde v
Ale ten pd
Je stle bl
Stoj na hraně
Slunce napravo
Otoč se
Tma zase
Nalevo
Světlo přli jasn
Čekat na zpad?
A sama asne
e řekne ani npad
Zbrkle se vrhne
Přmo do tmy
Slym ten vkřik
Je mi povědom
Sahm na sebe
A nectm teplo
Due ve vězen
A z nebe je peklo
Milion slziček
Po tvři steklo
Hledm dui
Pro jedno tělo
Srdce bu
Ač nechtělo
Ale mus
ivot mu slu
Nezn cestu?
Nezn tu dui?......
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-01-13 19:06:16]
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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wow, i think that this one is even better in czech ;) :D almost scary :p nice nice job :))
jeanie |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:45:17 AM AEST
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Dear Aika,
So many lost souls in this world that I know.
This poem was so good at explaining the
sorrow they show.
Never knowing which way to go....
This was a very emotional write Aida
but one I thoroughly enjoyed.
One of your best
Love you,
ConSue |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:54:55 AM AEST
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Very realistic! I liked this one, also very original!
I hear the scream
So familiar seems
Touching myself
I do not feel heat
Soul in the prison
And heaven is hell
Millions tears
Falling down my face
Wonderful!
Anne :D |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:02:32 AM AEST
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I think we are all lost souls in some way Aika...different reasons for different people.
One thing is sure, your work is not lost in here, it truly has a home !!
steve x |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:03:20 PM AEST
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| That was damn good. Incredibly write. I loved every word and line. |
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