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~Just Alone~
Contributed by
Wicked
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:07:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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They say you dont know what you have till its gone
Do you realize or maybe its me, am i really just alone
Being at your side is where i want to be i know
You have my heart my soul, Can i just let it all go?
A smile, a tender carress, a whisper of i love you
A kiss goodnight the slow intake of my breath the feelings anew
Walking away isnt gonna be all that easy this time
For i know this is the last im gonna cross the line
You awaken to a rose and a letter by your pillow
A strange feeling of what is gone and nevermore to be known
Etched onto the paper, an i love you please be happy.he sighs
Sorry you didnt want me, didnt mean to waste your time
A wrecking of his heart of something he took for granted
Tears for what he would never hold, never touch now faded
He realizes, yes he does, he really is, hes just alone
He took it for granted and now its nevermore its gone
Copyright ©
Wicked
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2004-01-14 01:07:05]
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Re: ~Just Alone~
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:21:26 AM AEST
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| Great write ... straight from the heart ... an emotional and heartfelt write ... Jan |
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Re: ~Just Alone~
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:50:34 AM AEST
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| really beutiful....everyone makes mistakes the heart has to hurt |
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Re: ~Just Alone~
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by forever--jo on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:55:53 AM AEST
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| a very emotional one... i like the way u wrote it. it seems like its the only way you can express how u really feel! keep it up! |
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Re: ~Just Alone~
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:07:17 AM AEST
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So heartfelt in your words, this is a great poem.
Cheers
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Re: ~Just Alone~
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:21:49 AM AEST
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| Good write. It was very strong and filled with emotion. |
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