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The Piece I left Behind
Contributed by
hope
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:09:10 AM in AEST
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Who knows what the future holds
Who knows where my life will lead
The days travel so fast
Yet time stands still
A part of me is in my past
The part of me that just couldnt last
The piece of me that was left behind
Is what my heart will always try to find
I stayed back there to hide my tears
I couldnt go on because of my fears
I fought a battle within myself
The place where darkness hid itself
Who can say what road I would take
If life was without those horrible mistakes
Copyright ©
hope
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2004-01-14 01:09:10]
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:48:38 AM AEST
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| i think everyone thinks like this your not alone. i like this poem very much |
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:04:08 AM AEST
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This certainly wakes ones mind, i agree, evwryone feels this from time to time, a great poem to read.
Cheers
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by Hanno on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:05:34 AM AEST
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| Very good use of words,I know exactly what you are saying. |
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:07:04 PM AEST
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| Great! This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. Very touching, too. You'll be made whole again. |
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by Lessa on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:28:31 PM AEST
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| its like u read my mind, i love this, it puts to word things i wanna say, wow |
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:13:16 AM AEST
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God knows your path, and He'll show you in His time. If life was "without those horrible mistakes", we'd never grow stronger. Take faith, and hope.
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 04:11:23 PM AEST
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Yes, the extended version of this was awesome. Like I said, never stop writing.
Take care,
David |
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Re: The Piece I left Behind
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by amandadawn1982 on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:09:47 PM AEST
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I completely see where you are coming from in this poem. We all feel like we are alone in the world and in some of what we do we have to do alone.. But this poem shows a great portion of what all of us go thru regularly...
Keep up the great writing
Amanda |
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