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Empyrean Dream
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:06:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hand in hand love walks with me
This is my vision of what heaven should be
Landscape ignited by moon and starlight
A flawless painting with everything right
Two faces caressed by the calming breeze
Two souls connected, two hearts at ease
In this beautifully vast and lush green field
Memories, desires, and hopes are revealed
When we are together minutes become hours
Sitting, embracing, amidst wildflowers
Swirling around us as fireflies
Are the brightest of wishes in disguise
A bond even time cannot destroy
To feel it, to know it, to shed tears of joy
Alone for miles to walk this plain
Our Garden of Eden, minus the pain
And so we kiss on a grassy knoll
Heart to heart, soul to soul
Sunrise breaks, the evening flees
One night to live forever in our hearts and memories
Copyright ©
Vitreous_Soul
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2004-01-14 07:06:19]
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:10:53 AM AEST
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What a full heart is shown within your words. This poem is superb.
Cheers
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:17:48 AM AEST
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Awwww how romantic!! Beautiful poem! Vivid imagery and heart melting words! Perfect! I love this poem! Continue writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:57:31 AM AEST
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V.S,
Another magnificant poem by yourself
again showing us all how far your talent spreads, even into the eternal relams of love wonderful use of imagery and the flow of this is timeless
keep up the amazing work
Luke
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:12:13 AM AEST
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very very nice write. I really enjoyed that one. Keep them coming, keep uo the awsome work.
Majestic |
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:16:27 AM AEST
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| Beautiful sensuous write ... divine poetry ... Jan |
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:03:42 PM AEST
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I for once, am at a loss for words. Reading your poem was like seeing a dream. Flowing, sublime, calming, a beautiful write. I seem to repeat myself over and over with you but this is my new favorite! You are so gifted and blessed to be able to write like this. I want to get lost in your poem.
I rate this a 5+ in my eyes.
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:19:42 AM AEST
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Dear VS.....You did this one up just right!
Exquisite Delight!
Lovingcritters
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Re: Empyrean Dream
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 11:37:15 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. I loved this. It was great. |
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