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My Thought As I Drove Home
Contributed by
13hopes
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:36:54 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Time has passed yet i know not how long. Please my sweet, keep your heart strong. For together we will be, all i need is my kids, you and me. Then happiness is what i will find, prayng for time to soon be kind. Every day that i dont see you, ill tell you i love you when every morning i call. You walked through my walls, for you i did fall. For a reason fate let us meet, for you my heart will not see defeat. Let me thankyou for today, will i give up fighting for a way. Never will i give up that fight, all i want is to treat you right. I give the very best that i can, how funny is it that never did i plan. Plan to meet someone and fall in love, then you came along my little white dove. There was nothing, then you were there. Never before have i wanted to care. My friend Damien when he passed away, he gave me a message, to thank you, pretty lady, i thank you too. You never met him face to face, he wanted to meet you befor he left this place. Now he rests forever does he dream, along with Deb and the rest of my team. In all the sad times that i have seen, thank you for bieng there, my closest friend, with this poem, to you my love i send. That old wound in my heart, now it begins to mend.
Time and distance are the same yet they differ. Both are used to get from one point to another. The same path in distance can be travelled as many times as one needs. Time once used can never be regained. But time holds all moments. Every moment with you i cherish.......... ( But i love the way you think. :) That message was not shared between you and i alone, my little man was awake too... :):)
(just thought id tell you that now)
Loving you,
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13hopes
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2004-01-14 08:36:54]
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Re: My Thought As I Drove Home
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:30:02 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts and allowing a glimpse into who you are. You have alot of depth and I found this soothing to read.
You deserve the best in life. You have a good heart.
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Re: My Thought As I Drove Home
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:00:04 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. I enjoyed it. It was very touching. |
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