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Invisible?
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:37:33 AM in AEST
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Am I invisible?
Or did you accidentally look straight through me?
Am I that un-noticable that you look straight past me?
I am nothing to you
You used to know me
I'm just this girl to you
But you used to love me
You say im diffrent
But I dont really care
Why's it so bad to be different?
I dont understand, why's that so bad?
You say I've changed, that I've lost myself
But really its you that lost me...
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2004-01-14 09:37:33]
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Re: Invisible?
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:08:21 AM AEST
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Very nice write. I myself feel the same way at times. Someone says "Your different" and it makes me think what kind of different... Very good one. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Invisible?
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:45:11 AM AEST
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This is really great, its an angry poem which just spits at you! Thats quite hard to do, which means you must really feel/or have felt this way, and dont worry, we all go invisible sometimes, but eventually people notice...
Alec Fernandez
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Re: Invisible?
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by LiveTheDream on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:16:23 PM AEST
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I really like this ur emotion was well expressed and ive felt exactly like u so i know where ur coming from and can relate as gd mates do!
xxxx |
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Re: Invisible?
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:16:37 PM AEST
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| Good write. Mayhap you just don't realize how you've changed... Never know. |
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Re: Invisible?
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:41:03 AM AEST
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We all grow and change, but we need to learn to accept change and merge and grow with it. This felt like something written out of desperation, angry almost.
Take care,
David |
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