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Nothing Should Feel Like This
Contributed by
Kirby
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:41:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One million paper cuts
A shotglass full of battery acid
Needles in my eyes
A spoon taking out my heart
None of these compare.
Compare to this pain.
The pain that you brought me.
Me the woman madly in love with you.
I feel like I have been runover.
My skin peeled off.
Salt pourn into every crevace.
Smashed in my a hammer.
Love shouldn't feel like this.
Nothing should feel like this.
We were meant to be together.
Just not today I guess.
Then again...maybe not ever.
One day you will feel this pain.
One day you will want to be dead.
Then you will look back on this day
Then you will see what pain you brought me!
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2004-01-14 13:41:38]
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:12:45 PM AEST
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Oh I'm so sorry for you! WHo was this Bas**** that made you this? I liked the way you described your feelings very vivid! Amazing!
Anne :D |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:21:41 PM AEST
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I like this hate-filled rant it warmed me up like a glass of whisky. It was beautiful in its own way and I know how u feel being all angry and p*ssed off.
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:05:15 PM AEST
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Someone has gone and taken away your power. He's probably an un-feeling sap, and will never have a clue.
My heart is like a patch-work quilt its been broken and sewn together so many times...I just recently had the pleasure of hurting someone who had hurt me in the past and found that it really was no pleasure to see him hurting. It just made me wish that things had been different. So there's really no pleasure in hoping for him to hurt like you do, because like the title of your poem says, nothing (or no one) should feel like this.
The poemput wonderful, and vivid pictures in my mind and made me feel what you feel..Find another man
thats worth what you have to offer..then give it to him ....all night long. LOL |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:41:50 PM AEST
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The pain you feel really stood out in your poem. It was really well written. Hang in there...Like the rest of us eventually it'll get better. I loved your poem.
Kie |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:10:00 PM AEST
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| This is so sad especially if you are still going through. As others have said, hang in there! |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:47:31 PM AEST
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This was such an amazing write to read, left me with images and emotions only true poets can bring up. im sorry to hear about such a pain and your right nobody on this planet should feel it, and im sorry you have
try to hang in their and were all here if you need to talk to anyone, if that doesnt help.. i know someone who can fill a lemon with concentrated hydrocloric acid, force him to suck that, ;)
All the best
Kepp it up (head and writing)
Luke x |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:30:08 PM AEST
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| This was a very good write. It was very descriptive. I understand those pains all too well. I still hope it works out the way you want it to. |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:59:49 PM AEST
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I pray that you will heal.
"Above all, watch your heart, for from it springs life."
Take care.
David |
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Re: Nothing Should Feel Like This
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:38:29 AM AEST
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| i loved this poem great write, you can really see the pain the person put on you... |
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