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Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:21:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Somewhere, sometime, somehow,
A man can stop
Down the road he is going,
Peer down another
And see a shadow in the distance
The shadow,
What could have been,
Can turn and see the face
Of that which aspired to be
Him in his lesser days
Curiosity unsatiated,
A lost goal unfulfilled,
Lost for the sake of another
Our man can not help but
Wonder about his friend in the distance,
A friend he once knew
Time loves these tricks
That beg the travelor to
Ponder such things,
That bid him to stop
And stare
But our man can blink
Back into the road he now knows,
There have been so many in the past,
And will be in the future,
He can let the phantoms go
Because the Could-Have-Beens
That he holds to such prestige
Will evade him forever
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Re: Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:36:33 PM AEST
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Oh wow! very thoughtful poem! Nice one and beautifully written! Wise!
Anne :D |
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Re: Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:46:38 PM AEST
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| Interesting, thought provoking, and well written. I liked this one. It was pretty good. |
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Re: Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:56:40 AM AEST
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I love your poetry...you look so young and sound so wise...I envy your talent. My goal is to read everything you write...
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Re: Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:43:04 PM AEST
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Sometime ago I read another poem of yours (16 to 8 to 4 to 2) and was impressed. I've got lost in between that and the intent to check out your file. Now I'm here I think i'll stay for a bit longer, as you have a very interesting imagination which is in evidence in your poetry.
Really good write. |
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