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The Finishing Point
Contributed by
DDPoetry
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 04:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I observe you as you rest
Thats all you can do now
Long agoso full of verve
A red-headed firecracker
Bursting to show everyone
There is nothing you could not initiate
At this moment
your eyes are tired
not blue as they once were
Muddydull gray
Your face has always been too pale
somehow luminous
the inner beauty
shone through
Unexpectedly you rise up
open your mouth to speak
We do not understand your words
butsay we do
The significance of your last expressions
is eminent
however
we will not know their meaning
in this lifetime
DD8/02
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Re: The Finishing Point
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:09:05 AM AEST
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| Very nice , a beautiful write. |
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