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Dreams
Contributed by
monkey
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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beautiful
is the fire
that burns within
inextinguishable
is the need
to succeed
big
are my dreams
to one day be real
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-01-14 21:51:00]
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Re: Dreams
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by Vampy on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:08:36 PM AEST
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Lovely... :)
I like the style. |
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Re: Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:32:15 PM AEST
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| very nice:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dreams
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 08:22:40 PM AEST
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| Nice and positive, good spirit! ^_^ |
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Re: Dreams
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:23:19 AM AEST
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| I like the first stanza best. You said all you needed to in such a short poem. Good job. |
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