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touch me
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:55:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The sensations run right through my body
The feelings you give always excite me
you always seem to capture my gaze
your hand strokes on the seem of my dress
the experience you gave me fills my thoughts
want to feel you agianst me once more
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2004-01-15 09:55:20]
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Re: touch me
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by Empty_Soul on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:59:05 AM AEST
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| lol not bad tammy, its alright for some unlike me. lol |
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Re: touch me
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:06:42 AM AEST
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Was just getting in to that full of passion
Wonderful little poem
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: touch me
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:39:33 PM AEST
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heat filled emotions of hope and wanting
brilliant tam :)
All the best hun
Luke |
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Re: touch me
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:37:33 PM AEST
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Oh wow! Short but very passionate! Great write! Really sensuous. Hmm write more love this type of poems!
Anne ;) |
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Re: touch me
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:09:27 AM AEST
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This burns with desire and passion, and it's easy to notice the strength of your emotions. Splendid write, short but sweet.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: touch me
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:08:19 PM AEST
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| I agree with V.S. Nice write. Very passionate and shows a longing. I liked it. |
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Re: touch me
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by Butterat_Zool on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:25:01 PM AEST
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| Ditto. Butterat Zool. |
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