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Hope
Contributed by
Darchelle
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Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:23:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hope is like a candle flame,
It flickers now and then.
Sometimes we need help to see,
The strength that lies within.
Life's not always easy,
We're bound to have some sorrow.
But hope can keep us going,
For a better day tomorrow.
So when you light this candle,
And the flame is burning bright,
May the angels bring you hope,
And turn your darkness into light.
Copyright ©
Darchelle
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2004-01-15 17:23:39]
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Re: Hope
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by Lessa on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:36:43 PM AEST
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| i really like that, and im not one for the more upbeat kinda of poems |
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Re: Hope
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:00:20 PM AEST
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| Nice words, nice flow ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Hope
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:24:38 PM AEST
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| Very nicely said with an incredibly good flow. |
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Re: Hope
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:42:01 PM AEST
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As Jan and Jeff said, absolutely great flow. I love that certain lilting quality in it that makes me want to read this aloud. The rhymes rhyme so easily, so . . . flow-ily :). Nice, very nice.
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