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Untitled...
Contributed by
Darchelle
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Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm feeling nervous
My mouth is dry
My voice is weak
I feel like I'm going to cry
Why do you make me feel this way?
I know I don't show it, but I want you to stay
You don't understand, I guess I'm just scared
Of knowing that I really cared
Too much, or not enough; I'm not sure
To me, it's all just one big blur
But I do know I need you to love me
I need you to care, I need you to need me
Who knows maybe you're just as scared
Copyright ©
Darchelle
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2004-01-15 17:53:53]
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Re: Untitled...
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:08:20 PM AEST
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| Good poem , Pascal was awesome wasn't he? hmmm.I have the same problem you do along with my heart feeling like its going to explode everytime he is around. |
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by Lessa on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:07:30 PM AEST
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| I agree, but hunny your dont NEED anyone but yourself, but this is a good write |
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Re: Untitled...
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 11:22:15 AM AEST
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This is so sad, but such a great poem..
and thankyou so much for your comment on my poem 'Sweet Release'. you know you can PM me anytime, okay?
Take care,
charlotte x_x_x |
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:40:52 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one. I wish people would just say things though. It does make it easier and causes less pain. Very good write. |
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