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I would my friend, If I could
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I could give to you the day of the sun,
dripping roses, on the path to heaven,
and show what I see thru my eyes,
to take away the fears,
I would my friend, If I could,
If I could turn that clock of time,
and die for those in whom you loved,
and fill all your days with joy and peace,
and borrow time for the deceased,
I would my friend, If I could,
If I could bring back to you,
the smile of youth,
those young and youthful years,
and give you back the time you lost,
and take out all your fears,
I would my friend, If I could,
If I could be there by your side,
and gently hold you in my arms,
at least you'd know that for a day,
I'd keep you out of harm,
I would my friend, If I could,
If I could bring to you a day,
to smile once again,
and show you what this world is,
with warmth, love, peace, and grace,
I would my friend, If I could,
for you!
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Valerie_Pearson
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by Kie on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:54:06 PM AEST
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W.O.W!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful poem Val ! How touching and how nicely written ! One of my faves ! I absolutely loved it !
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:57:35 PM AEST
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lovely everyone needs a friend in this world like you.
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:18:33 AM AEST
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Excellent work maam- good luck with the book'
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:27:31 AM AEST
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| Oh I know youve been writing this book cant wait! This was so beautiful,as always your work touches my heart! Christina |
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:17:08 PM AEST
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Wonderful
I would love to find the exact words to say how much I enjoyed this........if I could :)
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Re: I would my friend, If I could
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:26:55 PM AEST
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This is lovely, Val...really enjoyed it..
Hugs
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