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cryin' to be cozy
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:58:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i can be safly tucked away in your monitor,
always there when you want a lover or a friend,
loyal convienient lady who loves you unendingly,
but...
on this side of the monitor i am angry tonight,
unamused you are so far away and intangible,
returning to your country feeling as if i am a mere dream,
so...
i sit here thinking of the beautiful long days we spent,
together...
the sweet kisses and holding you and feeling safe in your arms,
it has been years since i felt that way,
cozy...
seems you hold the key to my heart,
damnit,
your sunny buzy as night comes upon me,
an artic chill is breathing down my neck,
no matter what i do i cannot get warm,
brrr...
i'm tired of looking into colourful illustrious sky,
it has no answers anymore, only clouds of pink,
only one amazing wonder of my lonely forest world,
hmm..
i wait here quietly while you decide to turn on your pc,
pink whispy beauty gently but cruely teasing me into tears,
it has been two days since a word from you and i am calmly
loosing my mind,
whilst,
safly tucked away in your monitor.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2004-01-16 00:58:49]
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by venkat on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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| I feel sad to see you in such a mood..this is a great poem with superb expression of heart felt emotional feelings. excellent write my friend. venkat |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:29:42 AM AEST
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| This saddens me more than I can say ... silence from a loved one is one of the most painful emotions to deal with .. and my heart goes out to you Nessa ... an excellent write my friend ... Jan |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:47:30 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa Im so sorry that your so sad, I can feel this sadness sitting here. What can I do to make you feel better???
Michelle |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:07:09 AM AEST
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you know where to reach me if you need to talk...
Shari |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by LiveTheDream on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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I really liked this and also felt sad i hope this person speaks to you soon and you do not wait long. I really liked the line"an artic chill is breathing down my neck", a really descriptive poem-nice one!
xxxx |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:12:26 PM AEST
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((((((((((((((((((((((((nessa))))))))))))))))))))))))
Heartbreakingly beautiful
Larry |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:59:57 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww....where is he???Why does he leave you sitting alone behind that monitor??? Find comfort in the night sky...it is the same sky he sees also! {{{Nessa}}}
~Angel always...godspeed...joni~ |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:52:17 AM AEST
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| Nessa, so sorry for you, those days will soon be over, your love will catch you in surprise, he hasn't forgotten you, probably just resting up, (You tired him out Lady ) love ya, Val |
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Re: cryin' to be cozy
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:40:26 PM AEST
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This is so sad...and I know how you feel. And because of that I'm even sadder because it's so much harder than I have words to say. I'm sorry you feel this way, and I'll send good thoughts your way. Love,
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