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sleeping alone
Contributed by
lonesomerose
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Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:59:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Cold winter night ice on the roads
lonesome here tonight its to quiet.
The stillness after a snowfall here
is almost unnerving to me for a moment.
House is warm yet cold at the same time
only sound is the clock on the hours chime.
Wind is howling a souless moan
that seems as lonely as I feel.
Now Im here all alone tonight
it seems as though time stands still.
Fluffy pillows on a comfy bed
hand made quilt to lesson the chill.
As soft as it may be
it doesnt make up for sleeping alone.
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lonesomerose
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2004-01-16 02:59:29]
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Re: sleeping alone
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:41:04 AM AEST
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Wow, This poem is such an emotional one..... it brough me right into your world. The thought of beeing so warm and yet so cold, a bed so soft but yet so painful..... wow.... and you know the weirdest thing is--- in my computer room here (where I'm sitting right at this moment), there is a chime clock behind me. when I read "only sound is the clock on the hour's chime", it chimed! as if it was cued by your writing =) lol......
Crazy stuff.... =)
Well done.
God bless (and hugs),
Ellen |
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Re: sleeping alone
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:14:27 PM AEST
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You brought tears to my eyes, I can certainly relate. "Wind is howling a souless moan
that seems as lonely as I feel" That hit home.
Great poem. Kie |
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