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Ice cold
Contributed by
desertwispers
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ever look at someone
straight in the eye
there is no twinkle there
just a vacant stare?
A smile across the lips
but ice cold stare
maybe thinking your unaware
of just how frigid it really is.
Eyes that look through you
making you spin
leaving a chill from toes to chin
as you feel it crawl on your skin.
This winter eve is cold
dipping way below
the frigid air is welcome
but your ice cold.
Ice cold that I cant release
from these frozen bones
I try to shake you
to find ease away from you.
I close my eyes
I still see your eyes
the way you looked at me
told the tale
your ice cold.
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2004-01-16 03:22:53]
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Re: Ice cold
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:36:12 AM AEST
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People can be so inwardly bitter..... I can see exactly the kind of person you're writing about..... Makes me cringe..... A very well done write. And your rhyming in the second stanza, that's a really neat idea. Just to connect the two inside. I should try that sometime =)
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Ice cold
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 05:36:25 PM AEST
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| Damn. I liked this. It really spoke right to me. I could fully relate. I know I do this on occasion and I don't know how bad it is. Sometimes it's either that or feel something and that can be so unbearable. Great write. |
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