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FANTASY TRAIN
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:56:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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(ADULT FANTASY)
I climbed the steps
In the pouring rain,
That led up to the train.
A woman just behind me,
Who was also dripping wet,
She slipped and fell
And I could tell
She needed help
To stand back up.
As I reached my hand
To Lift her,
She looked up into my eyes.
A tingle then shot through me,
As she began to tantalize.
She would not let go
Of my hand.
She pulled me another way.
And when she found her cabin,
She told me to come and play.
Her soaking clothes fell to the floor,
As I fell down to my knees.
I asked her not to tease me.
But she giggled and said oh please!
She grabbed my shirt and pulled it out,
From my pants where it was tucked.
She unzipped my pants and looked at me,
And commanded now lets *****!
I stood with mouth wide open.
It happened way to fast.
As she grabbed me with
Both hands and then
She pulled me toward her mouth.
I did not want to be there.
I remember feeling trapped.
But as I warmed up to it,
I decided what the crap.
Then as I began to feel good,
And to think this was just fine,
The alarm clock started ringing.
For it was my wake up time.
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2002-09-01 19:56:12]
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Re: FANTASY TRAIN
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 11:59:13 AM AEST
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| oh, the power of a dream, wonderful write Robert, |
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Re: FANTASY TRAIN
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by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:37:51 PM AEST
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great write robert just a suggestion but maybe that last line could read....
It was time for me to wake up.
just a suggestion in any case loved the illussion |
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Re: FANTASY TRAIN
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 02:50:53 PM AEST
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Bravo! very well written
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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