|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Seventeen
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
All these feelings make no sense,
Hurting is a daily routine,
Guilty for loss of innocence,
Confusion from being seventeen
Sometimes just wanting to cry,
Fear so real; Stuck in denial,
Anger alive; watching passers by
Frustration venting; Its been a while
All these words do is hurt me,
Sick of these thoughts in my headm
Losing all hope; losing sanity
Wishing to be dead instead;
Of being alive
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
... [
2004-01-16 13:31:41]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Seventeen
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:21:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hey Alec... even when you're 47 things hurt and feelings make no sense..
Good write..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Seventeen
(User Rating: 1 )
by dudleysgirl on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:31:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
alec, this is so touching. You've expressed the sentiments of many a teenager here. I remember feeling like this when I was seventeen. And fifteen and sixteen as well. I grew up in an abusive home, and I think that in doing so, I have become so much stronger than most people. I can still relate to the words you've penned here. The most poignant lines for me are 'Hurting is a daily routine.' 'Confusion from being seventeen'.'Sometimes I just want to cry'. 'Sick of these thoughts in my head'. Brings back so many harsh memories. This is nice work, alec. Keep writing. Take it from someone who's been there, writing things down does help. Stay strong and don't check yourself out of this life. You'll be better than most in the end!
{{hugs}}
Judy |
|
|
Re: Seventeen
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 07:42:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| sorry you feel this way, one day you'll look back and wonder where those years have gone, stick with us, there's so much fun ahead of you, take care Val |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
