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the black mist.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:09:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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black mist covers my vision,
i can't see a thing!
then others say,
what's wrong with her brain?
coz i sit, and do nothing!
when the world laughs and deceives, i weep,
when i get some thing i revieve, and keep,
weather i choose to keep it or not,
one way or anther my brain gets shot!
though all the while i'm stuck in a web,
my world is spinning and i keep thinking about death!
i don't wanna move or be part of the world,
i don't wanna breath,
i don't want someone to hold,
i don't need you here,
i don't need you to care,
i just wanna be alone,
in my cone,
for-ever!
i don't need your pity,
or don't need to be told what to do,
i won't let you rule me,
on my own i'll get through,
i still wanna be at home,
but i want to be alone,
DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND!
just for ever,
and ever!
i want to be on my own!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-16 17:09:07]
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Re: the black mist.
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:16:15 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem...i havent read too much of your poems but this one has gotten me interested in your work. Keep it coming! |
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Re: the black mist.
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 08:15:02 PM AEST
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Being alone sometimes is the best medicine. I hope it all works out for you. Your poem was fantastic to read.
Kie |
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Re: the black mist.
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:58:45 PM AEST
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| This was a good one. I think I understood it pretty well. Nicely done. |
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