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Tragic Stupidity
Contributed by
PieEater
on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 07:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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my life is changing
or not at all
same old patturn
plummet or fall
i'm crazy
i'll tell you why
peoples stupidity
make me want to die
but thats a normal thing
to want to do
whats not normal
is your ******* IQ
i cut myself
to feel the sting
but you don't care
it's not big thing
have you ever pinched yourself
to make sure your still real
will i cut myself
to make sure i can still feel
it's a philosophy
wrong or right
i don't care
i'm still going to fight
you people keep trying
to screw me up the ***
but i'm not going to let
this bull **** pass
i'm not going to be blamed
for others sin
it's not going to happen
never again
Copyright ©
PieEater
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2004-01-16 19:20:28]
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Re: Tragic Stupidity
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:50:51 AM AEST
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| I think adding the s's and a's in the right places would be a good idea. Don't try to ryme so hard just let it flow. It was still a rather good poem. Very interesting for sure. |
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