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The lonely square
Contributed by
ArdRi79
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:38:55 AM in AEST
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A shot rings out across a lonely square
Towards a baleful downtrodden man
The bullet flies towards some sons fathers head
To fill people with intolerable terror and dread.
To force them to stand up for what they believe
Because the cause of world peace was used to deceive
For oil, the commandments of capitalism and lies
A people were invaded and soldiers are sent off to die
And the small hands that squeezed a small trigger
That shot a small bullet into the head of some sons father,
Drop the gun and small feet run
As the peacekeepers see some mothers son
And shots ring out across a lonely square
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Re: The lonely square
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:44:04 AM AEST
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| strong poem, im so sorry for your loss! ((((ArdRi)))) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The lonely square
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:02:32 AM AEST
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| I'm sorry to hear that. |
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Re: The lonely square
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:17:13 AM AEST
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Very fine tribute, written well.
He's probably your angel now, watching over u and others.
I too am so sorry at your loss.
peace, joy, luv, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: The lonely square
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:57:51 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss. Every time I see our soilders dieing no matter where they r from it makes me wonna cry.
I do support all our soilders and I jus hope there r many over there that appreciate what our soilders from all over and their families and friends give up so they can be free.
this poem is well written and I'm sure he's read it as he's an angel now.
Thanks for sharing this and thanks so much for your sweet comment on my work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The lonely square
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by SkYYBLu on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:03:15 PM AEST
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Wow...your poem has moved me...I thought one person dying was a bad thing...but so many...I'm very sorry about your loss. Great write!
~Paige |
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