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Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
Contributed by
wrybod
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:21:18 AM in AEST
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There's one TV commercial
that really drives me spare.
It's miss ruddy "bouncy flouncy"
with her manageable hair
She's always found a new shampoo
that devastates her friends!
It's New! Improved! So natural
conditions all "split ends?"
She has that smug self satisfied
sweet smile upon her face.
No matter how she twists her head
her hair falls back in place.
D'you want to hear my fantasy
about her "golden locks?"
It's in between recordings
............................................
She keeps them in a box!
Copyright ©
wrybod
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2004-01-17 06:21:18]
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:58:08 AM AEST
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Cute.very well said.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:10:42 AM AEST
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Oh LOL!! Sorry for laughing but it really made me laugh! Very good written! Agree there are loads of tv commercials that make a lot of fuss on their product and when you buy them you find out that it was all fake! Good one I loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:53:30 AM AEST
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Thanks you made me laugh so much
My sides are hurting
Wish it could do all it says i would buy the company lol
Shining hair look like this right as if
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:44:46 AM AEST
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| Bob, so charming, love the way you look at the world, take care Val |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by norm on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:58:00 AM AEST
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This poem is written with a master's pen.
________________________________
There are no words to kill the thought,
I watch a story then I'm caught,
With gibberish from some 'flouncy' girl,
Who's head I'd love to spin a whirl.
As Mr Wrybod states aloud,
If I had hair then I'd be proud,
So let's just stop and give a moan,
We'll write our poems, to each his own...
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:21:05 AM AEST
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This is brilliant Bob, it made me laugh so much! I love reading your poems, keep em coming
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by Merry on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 04:51:22 PM AEST
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Leave it to you to notice such things - hmmmm keeps her locks in a box? Perhaps I should get myself a some perfectly boxed hair lol Very funny write.
merry |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:43:54 AM AEST
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Dear Bob mate
this one was funny in the box or out!
I love those commercials........I can always dream!
Great idea Bob Mate
really enjoyed this one!
consuemate |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:45:41 AM AEST
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| Hahahahaha! I think this was rather ammusing. I think you even wrote it durn well. |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by jeanie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 03:19:14 PM AEST
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Hahahahaaaaaaaaa!!!
Well, as it was already said here, this was damn funny and cool, really made me laugh! :D Nice simple words to tell a cool story about stupid commercial, I super agree! :D
jeanie |
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Re: Most hated TV Commercials No 1 (hair shampoos)
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:35:42 PM AEST
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Wow ..Thats a funny one.. I wonder what is ..or do you get many interperations of the box...etc
Whisper
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