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RUMBLE MY SOUL
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:45:25 AM in AEST
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Oh Master of all things!
Let heavens rafters ring.......
Rumble my soul, oh God
plant urr feet on Earth's sod.
When I'm down take control
let luv take my soul..
Keep me in your plan
Master take my feeble hands.
No matter what life brings
teach my heart to sing.
Put Satan under my feet
teach urr luv 2 speak.
Speak to us in gentle tones
as this Planet rocks on.
In our darkest midnite hour
Show us urr gentle power.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-01-17 06:45:25]
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Re: RUMBLE MY SOUL
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:37:36 AM AEST
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A novel way to talk to God (although I don't go along with the popular idea of God) I enjoyed the way you wrote this
bob |
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Re: RUMBLE MY SOUL
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:03:06 AM AEST
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| I loved it....good work and I love the desire that you have to want him more.....sandy |
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Re: RUMBLE MY SOUL
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 12:33:48 PM AEST
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I hear a chorus in the background, and clapping..great!
I've kind of given up...and that's a big mistake because the problems today, are too big for any human to handle. your poem was inspiring. |
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Re: RUMBLE MY SOUL
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 04:31:53 AM AEST
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| I like it. |
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Re: RUMBLE MY SOUL
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by a_bear on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:30:30 PM AEST
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| I was going through older poetry I'd written, reading comments...and came across one of yours. You mentioned this poem..I want to stand up and clap my hands...say amen..something. It's really nice. |
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