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Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
Contributed by
wrybod
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 12:59:50 PM in AEST
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Skin care adverts make me puke
those unctious whispered voices
that softly, gently, soothingly......
describe the many choices
Some "new improved", some "old and rare"
with "natural ingredients"
the treacle tones go on and on
with sickening expedients.........
To take away your wrinkles
and leave you looking younger......
Excuse me if I'm boring you
I won't go on much "lunger"
In fact I have to stop right now
to do as my wife wishes!
Get some washing up liquid
and "moisturise" the dishes!
Copyright ©
wrybod
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2004-01-17 12:59:50]
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:59:46 PM AEST
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LOL cute and witty little ditty
make sure your hands stay soft
washing those dishies lol.
(Im sick of comercials also!))
michelle |
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:49:42 PM AEST
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The best skin products are the purest all this wrinkle stuff is pure hype
Loved your poem
Made me laugh again thank you for the laughter
Brilliant
love Angelxxx |
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by Elf on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:37:40 PM AEST
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lol! cute write. got me laughing. I needed that. I hate those confounded comercials too.
-*Dixie*- |
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:22:53 AM AEST
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Dont you just hate those commercials!! Again really enjoyed this Bob. Take care
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by norm on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST
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That sharp wit has done its bit
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I wouldn't mind the ads
If they weren't read by women,
My wife jumps every morn
just because of Richard Simmon(s)
The other day an auto ad
caused my wife her job,
There ain't no sense in working
If you do not have a saab
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:47:53 AM AEST
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Gee Bob that was simply great and really help me out alot.
You see I hate to do dishes.....and now I know what to do.....just watch the commercials and they are done one and two!
Wheeeeeeeeeeee
You are so funnyyyyyyyyyyyy
Love this one too!
ConSueMate
P.S. your email is coming back from you? |
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Re: Most Hated TV Commercials No2 (Smoothies)
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by wolfwynd on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:06:08 AM AEST
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| hehe, great poem! made me laugh out loud quite a few times whilst reading it. your humour is very much the same as mine - i hate those commercials too lol! xx |
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