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My Dream
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:14:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A paradise
A heavenly place
I walk with my Love
While my heart starts to race
I know it's a dream
What else can it be?
How can my Love
Be so near to me?
Through sun and through rain
Forever we walk
Then under a tree
We stop to talk
Your voice so sweet
I thought I would die
Or if I had wings
I know I could fly
Your eyes they shine
Your face it glows
My love for you
Every second it grows
Then suddenly
You start to fade
My blessed dream
Is going away
The sun it glares
Into my eyes
Yet it can't compare
To the way you shine
And so I wake
Unto this place
My heart it hurts
For I lack your face
Forever I'll love you
Though forever is long
'Cause forever with you
I forever belong
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wachumiri
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2004-01-17 14:14:55]
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Re: My Dream
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:59:41 PM AEST
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| breathtakingly beautiful....... love your style:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Dream
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:11:06 PM AEST
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this is great poetry right here, so much passion deep inside it. I reckon that could make a great slow song!
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Re: My Dream
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:02:18 PM AEST
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Oh how well you capture a feeling which haunts me. Excellent write.
My poem is titled "The way we were" The same dream but not the same end.
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Re: My Dream
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:35:05 PM AEST
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WOW! This is probably about your BEST of the Linda poems! I am about to cry! I miss ya David, and I hope you may meet your lady love again soon! God bless
~Em |
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Re: My Dream
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by youlied on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 11:06:56 PM AEST
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| Your poems are so sweet and sincere; I can tell they really come from the heart. |
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Re: My Dream
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:26:27 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. If only dreams were lasting....wouldn't that be great?! well, I'm glad that heaven will never fade away.
Your friend who's just a kid,
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Re: My Dream
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:27:45 AM AEST
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Forever, It is such a scary word. But it's funny how we long to hear it. When you stop to think about all of the meanings it holds, you can easily lose your self in it.
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