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Dont Look Down
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:52:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It's so high up here,
I just cant believe,
Maybe its the beer,
I want to scream
I see the lights of the cars,
Shining so painfully bright,
Like the lights from mars,
Shining down in the night
Tears come to my eyes,
Scared and confused,
I just cant decide,
Maybe its the booze
Should I jump, Should I stay,
My conscience makes me think,
Should I live to fight another day?
What is this missing link?
I become dizzy, Stare at the sky,
Then I hear that sound,
Cars passing by,
I'm going to jump,
Just Dont look down
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
... [
2004-01-17 14:52:08]
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Re: Dont Look Down
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:10:39 PM AEST
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great write..... funny story behind it too... lol *hickup* lol
Nice poem =)
God bless,
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Re: Dont Look Down
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:58:04 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem.... even while under the influence...lol
Jenni |
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Re: Dont Look Down
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:03:55 PM AEST
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| Hmmmm... This one sure was interesting. I enjoyed it though I thought it was odd and messed up in it's own way. Pretty cool though. |
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