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black thorns kiss.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:59:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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your thorn's kiss, leaves me lying here,
your kiss! i'm alone in the dark,
thorns have stabbed me,
echoes have drouned me,
but still i want you back,
your my drug,
my hope,
my world,
your thorns,
are my pain,
but i want you to stay,
you say, you don't love me,
but i need you here,
be my eyes,
help me through,
my dear!
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2004-01-18 07:59:16]
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Re: black thorns kiss.
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:30:56 AM AEST
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| great title, hang in there, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: black thorns kiss.
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by fallen_eyes on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:31:54 AM AEST
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| I like the use of the thorns, it's a cool poem. Be cool to read some more stuff of yours T x |
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Re: black thorns kiss.
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 09:02:55 AM AEST
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| A really good poem. some things are meant to be and some things are not. i really hope you get what you want... |
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Re: black thorns kiss.
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:01:09 AM AEST
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| Good write. Sounds painful though. |
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