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Spinning
Contributed by
TheeCductress
on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 12:15:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tossed into a wind tunnel
I can not tell up from down
the things that you are saying
has my heart upon the ground.
I never meant to hurt you
I sware I never did
I wish you told me sooner
Instead of keeping all this hid.
I want to make things right
so I tell you how I feel
and still you rip my heart out
I can not believe that this is real.
I wonder if you realize
that your words have cut so deep
I wonder if it matters
that I will cry myself to sleep
I tell you one more time
so you know my words are true
but you brush me to the side
and all I want is the chance to love you.
Copyright ©
TheeCductress
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2004-01-18 12:15:25]
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Re: Spinning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:48:21 PM AEST
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Sorry to hear of your situation. AT times, when caring about someone, depends on the maturity level of that one. Sometimes, they cannot feel committed, which is the key word, especially for men, no matter the age here! Commitment is a strong thing, even in young love. It seems now a days, love seems so casual anymore, I wonder if the true meaning has meaning. I wish you well in your endevour to find true love. The kind that takes both of you to work at it, and mean something to both of you.
nice write, keep putting feelings into them, you will find how much you can gain from reading them later on.
AMber Rose :) |
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