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Dancing Man
Contributed by
Merry
on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:31:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the power of attraction divided
multipltied and weighed against
the feelings of emptiness
reaches new heights of absurdity
dancing just out of your reach
careful not to get caught
blurry eyes and beer breath
I know I can make my escape
so I keep dancing across the floor
hair swirling across my eyes
what is this blindness
that gives me pleasure
in knowing my affect on you
giving, is within my power
withholding is my choice
you stagger home alone
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Merry
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2004-01-18 18:31:00]
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Re: Dancing Man
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:36:43 PM AEST
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| hehe love it, your poetry always so filled with reality and great images:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dancing Man
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:41:49 PM AEST
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Lovely write....
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Re: Dancing Man
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by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:57:47 PM AEST
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| We've all been there! Excellent write! |
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Re: Dancing Man
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by Kie on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:36:54 PM AEST
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I read this a couple of times and I have to say that I was there, I saw it! Almost like a tease, what you can't have and the power to do just that. Love the way you write Merry.
Kie |
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Re: Dancing Man
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:22:25 AM AEST
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| Lol. Tease. Nice write though. I actually enjoyed it though I think it to be mean. Ah well. |
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