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The killing of the WE
Contributed by
SamB
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:16:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Small Voice: Is there anybody out there? Can anyone see the pain that resides in me?
Booming Voice: No bodys out there nor do they care to see the pain that's inside of me
SV: Who are are you to say what they want to see and who said you could be inside of me
BV: Stupid child can't you see that me and you you and me we make WE and not even I want to accnoledge the pain that's inside of me
SV: Is there anybody out there can anyone see what this horrid voice is saying to me?
BV: No ones there no one cares that one thinks your too fat, that one a neard juvinal deliquent is what I heard.
SV: Dose anyone hear this voice, is it true is that what you think? How about you, is that your view?
SILENCE
SV: Ok I see how it is now I'll make you see that I had to do this to make you see this is the way you had to be. You get the gun and I'll get the bullets and we'll get right down too it.
BV: NO WAIT don't do this with out you there is no me, please don't kill the WE
BANG
BV: Help me
Copyright ©
SamB
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2004-01-19 01:16:56]
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Re: The killing of the WE
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:26:48 AM AEST
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So sad!
So sorry no one listened.
Hope u r much better.
Very good writing as we all have our times when we think we've had all we could take.
I don't mean it's good that u felt this way. It's good that u reposted it.
I'm here, I'll listen and not judge u.
Huggs, luv,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: The killing of the WE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:06:13 AM AEST
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| damn... buddy that was raw... twisted and real... it reminds me of my life.... |
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