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DISTENCE BETWEEN
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:45:58 AM in AEST
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Some thing has put pittfalls in our path.
We wonder can we escape wrath?
To jump those hurdles oh so high,
scratching our heads, we sigh.
How can we get away from tears,
the heartache through the years?
In love lighting our way,
He heard through tears as we prayed.
The pain he felt so tender,
trusting him we remember.
Letting go of anger, all those things.
He came to put distence between.
As our souls and hearts touch
he showed us love, so much.
In his tender mercies the answer wise
to bring calm to stormy skies.
In unity God's plan unfolds as
we touch the throne, so bold!
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emystar
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2004-01-19 01:45:58]
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Re: DISTENCE BETWEEN
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:55:43 AM AEST
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| Insightfull work, the 13th and 14th lines really grabbed me |
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Re: DISTENCE BETWEEN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:03:31 AM AEST
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| beautifully written... |
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Re: DISTENCE BETWEEN
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by venkat on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:43:38 AM AEST
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| I agree with other comments.very nicely written..I enjoyed it..venkat |
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Re: DISTENCE BETWEEN
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:45:26 PM AEST
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| very sweet and loving emy, just like your heart:) huggies and lotsa love, nessa |
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Re: DISTENCE BETWEEN
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:53:03 AM AEST
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As I said the other day, I very much like the way you write and respect your faith and the
comfort /strength you derive from it.
I wonder if you would agree with my version of God's message in the very first poem I ever posted. It's called "Praying can't change the rules"
I am not seeking to challenge anyones faith, quite the opposite.
bob |
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Re: DISTENCE BETWEEN
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:33:51 AM AEST
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YOURS ARE REALLY PUT TOGETHER REALLY WELL!TO THE POINT & NOTHING TO WASTE!!WORTH READING ALL THE TIME!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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