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My letter
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I cant feel you, you left me so
Theres so many things you need to know
Now you question who i am...
So i question who i am inside
Now i have nothing left to hide
This is my letter...
I cant breathe, im lost for breath
My only comfort, this closing death
Just give me time...
I just cant find the right words to say
Of how you killed me, that final day
This is my letter...
I'm caught up in your broken truth
Just look around your see the proof
I dont want to hate you...
Truth surpassing that with which truth will say
Its just so hard, im so afraid
This is my letter...
I lost a friend so close to me
There nothing left for me to be
I'll leave you now..
Dont cry for me, for this theres no worth
My life was a failure from the beggining of birth
This is my final letter...
Goodbye to all, a farewell your see
Not to long, for the extinction of me
Im closing the deal...
No tear to be shed, at the news so sad
Because you know your the one that drove me mad
This is my letter...
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-01-19 12:23:16]
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Re: My letter
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 03:20:22 PM AEST
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I like the way you write. You reach into your soul and lay it out. It really touches me deeply. I have written so many letters similiar to this and writing has been my outlet in the worst of times. You write remarkable, feeling poetry.
Kie |
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Re: My letter
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by Empty_Soul on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 05:47:12 PM AEST
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Great poem luke, its funny i've jus posted a suicide poem an then I read urs an find out its about suicide, hmm we need help lol. for some reason i couldnt find the suicide poetry topic so i stuck mine under sad. Really like the style u've used here, when u told me how u had done it I was interested, still cant remember what its called, lol. oh well, look forward to your next write, love this one, one of my favourites.
keep of fighting
never stop writing
john (luv ya mate!! :-) ) |
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Re: My letter
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by fallen_eyes on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:19:46 PM AEST
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I love your work luke, always have since the first time you ever showed me one of your poems. I can never say your poems have got worse cuz I know for a fact they only ever get better. I really do like this poem.
luv ya always mate xx |
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Re: My letter
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:56:40 AM AEST
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This is so passionate and inspired. If only I could count the times i've felt this way.
Great theme, impeccable flow, loved the rhyme scheme. Your talent really shined through in this write.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: My letter
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:27:16 AM AEST
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| Nicely done. This was very well written. |
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Re: My letter
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 03:40:01 AM AEST
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| amazing, well done |
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