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Ecstacy in Release
Contributed by
Razor_Blade_Kisses
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 03:39:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The anger starts to ebb away
retreats to the place you let it stay
docile, no, it needs to rule
let it go or it will, you fool
Just tell them what you really feel
the weight is causing you to sink
drowning in a sea of rage
you hold the key to your own cage
It's destroying you from the heart
each hateful word a poison dart
soon it will have had enough
what are you going to do when the going gets tough
for this vehicle isn't equipped with a steering wheel
you can no longer control what it is you feel
the freedom that you know you crave
will end up driving you to the grave
the awful lies you often swallow
are forcing out life to make you hollow
and turning you into a robotic shell
deep down you rot in an angst-filled hell
its like pulling the trigger of a gun
a burst and then emotions run
just do it in one quick blow
and it'll be over before you know
the flow of despise will boil blood
release the tension in a world crushing flood
don't bottle up what you feel inside
escape the madness, dark angel, cry
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2004-01-19 15:39:20]
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Re: Ecstacy in Release
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by jme on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 04:53:09 PM AEST
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Great write. I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Ecstacy in Release
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:03:13 PM AEST
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Your poem was great. It rhymed so well, flowed perfectly.
"Just tell them what you really feel
the weight is causing you to sink
drowning in a sea of rage
you hold the key to your own cage"
Loved those four lines, you captured me right from the start. Well done! Kie
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Re: Ecstacy in Release
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:54:59 PM AEST
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| freakin awesome. good job. |
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