|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
The Moon and the Sun
Contributed by
Mouth
on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:44:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
The sun, with his flaming rays Boasts too magnificent a light For any man to long gaze sight Casting illumiantion across the lands Like a candle lighting a thousand fires In a dark room, revealing The animation of the world In it's full glory And illustrious allure. He brings us the warm days Filled with the memories And laughter of youth In it's ever fading gleam, Like a canvas the awaits To re-create the undying dream. While the moon, Her pale disposition Quietly whispers lullabies To a sleeping world With her soulful weepy words, Casting the shadows In an already dark land Silently hiding in the sky Like a well kept secret. Her moods undulate like her form, From a silver fang- To a full mounted array Of pure fasioned ever present light Modest in it's presentation, However; bold in contrast To the gloomy night sky she rules. The stars compliment her form Like a smile would, Shining to salute her demure glow. So not to ask why She is only half the radiance of the sun Only to rule the same sky? Her fair lady does not brood in this truth- You see, Because It is she that stirs the dreams and desires Of men midst their deep sleep, Giving them time for thought and wonder Away from the wild wild world. In the end though, It remains the same Night and day are tamed by opposite light. The sun- He shouhts and shines with all his might To reveal the day, And the moon quietly charms the night With a faint unearthly glow of wisdom, Men would die to know. The sun and moon seem to be Just like men and women, Two very different lights That rule the same sky....
Copyright ©
Mouth
... [
2004-01-19 19:44:31] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Moon and the Sun
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:25:47 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good write! I would suggest stanzas if u feel a poem is too long. But i like this poem keep them coming! |
|
|
|