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At A Dark Time
Contributed by
AsrealTheFallen10
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Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:49:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I Feel So Alone
I Come from a Broken Home
Nothing Seems Sacred Any More
My Minds Been Blown
Your Love I Thought Id Own
But Now I See, That You and Me
Were Never Meant to Be
I Thought I Loved You
And Baby I Still Do
I Dont Know What the Hell Is Going on
What Is with You
Is it True What They Say?
You Just Gotta Live Life to the Fullest Each Day
Im Nothing but Blood, Sweat, and Fears
I Cant Get over You for the Life of Me
People Laugh at Me
My Lifes One Fouled up Tragedy
And You Know this S*** Is Sad to See
Girl All I Want Is You to Be Back with Me
Baby Why Cant You See
God it Gets Lonely
When Its Only My Life I See
Why Do You Act like Your Mad at Me
Girl You Know this Is How it Had to be
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AsrealTheFallen10
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2004-01-19 19:49:33]
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Re: At A Dark Time
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:55:30 PM AEST
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| This is a powerful poem....wow....i really dont know what to say and that rarely happens. Send me an message if u ever need to talk or anything. Good luck! |
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Re: At A Dark Time
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by Mouth on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:04:25 PM AEST
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Your poem is great. One peice of advice I offer, is that trying to rhyme lines chokes and bounds one's creative realm. If it fits, good use it, but sometimes it can take away from the inensity the writer wishes to convey. Great write though, it flows nicely...
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Re: At A Dark Time
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:34:45 AM AEST
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wow this is an awesome poem.. ITs sad when we lose someone we truly love and they don't love us the same back.. I hope you feel better
great write!
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Re: At A Dark Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
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| WOW! YOUR A GOD! LOVE YOU! |
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Re: At A Dark Time
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:29:04 PM AEST
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This is a nice poem.Thanks and Cograts.
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Re: At A Dark Time
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:22:15 AM AEST
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| This had alot of emotion in it. It was rather good. Nicely done. |
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